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Mr Ronald McDonald

RONALD MCDONALD

Yesterday Ronald Mcdonald came to our school for a show. All of the students from our school went to the show. The show was in the multipurpose room and we had to sing a song called, Make it Click and another song called, Stop Look and Listen Before You Use Your Feet. After that there was a kid from Room 12 at Ruapotaka School and his name is Mika. He showed us how to cross a road. Ronald McDonald’s mission was that he had to find his sock and his sock was at the back of him all the time. At the end of the show we said bye to RONALD MCDONALD.

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